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   Mohammad Ilyas

   Posted May 12, 2011 at 12:27 PM

   سعید نقوی صاحب ! سلام مسنون ۔۔۔۔۔ اردوسخن ڈاٹ کام پرآپ کاافسانہ ’پتلی تماشا‘ پڑھا ، بہت عمدہ اور اچھوتا افسانہ ہے۔ اسلوب بھی دلکش ہے اور کہانی میں بھی دلکشی اور رعنائی ہے۔کٹ پتلی کا تماشا دکھانے والے کے احساسات کا بہت باریک بینی سے مطالعہ کیا گیا ہے اور بہترین طرز اظہار میں ڈھالا گیا ہے۔میری طرف سے آپ کو بہت بہت مبارک باد۔
   محمد الیاس ندوی رامپوری انڈیا

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     saeed naqvi

     Posted May 14, 2011 at 3:07 AM

     Thanks

     Not sure how to use inpage to type my response in Urdu. This story is from my first collection of short stories “nama bur”, the second collection is expected next month “doosra rukh” hopefully you will like it.

     Saeed

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   نور محمد اعوان

   Posted July 11, 2011 at 8:44 PM

   اچھی کاوش ہے۔ ترقی کیلئے دعا گو ہوں
   نور محمد اعوان

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   Javaid Sajan

   Posted October 18, 2011 at 7:00 AM

   achcha afsana hay. mubarikbad

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   Anwar Jodecy

   Posted October 20, 2011 at 5:32 AM

   achcha afsana hay. mubarikbad

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   Saadia

   Posted November 14, 2011 at 3:08 PM

   Very interesting short story produce a distinction , very very thank you for publishing.

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   Mahavir Dildar

   Posted November 23, 2011 at 8:40 AM

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   Shah Noor Khan Wali

   Posted November 30, 2011 at 8:39 PM

   achchi tahreer parhnay ko mili. mubarikbad

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   Jamshaid Iqbal

   Posted December 1, 2011 at 1:03 PM

   achcha afsana parhnay ko mila. thanks nasir malik

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   dr. Mohayyauddin Senha (Thailand)

   Posted December 2, 2011 at 9:32 PM

   good short story. i appreciate the web moderator of http://www.urdusukhan.com

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    Nayyar Irfan

    Posted December 4, 2011 at 2:35 PM

    achcha afsana parnay ko mila. zabar dast end aor acha andaz e tahreer hay.

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    Sundar Sabash (Tokyo)

    Posted December 15, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    achcha afsna hay, afsana nagar ko mubarik bad paish karta hon achi takhleeq par
    Sundar Sabash
    Tokyo, Japan

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    Zandra Singh

    Posted December 17, 2011 at 2:44 AM

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    Summan Shah Taj

    Posted December 23, 2011 at 5:20 AM

    achi tahreer hay. mubarik bad qaboo l ho. urdu sukhan ki web site bhi la jawab hay.
    Summan Shah Taj
    Canada