v nyc poetry by asif shahzad
jahan tak mujy lagta hy en ki poetry del sy likhi gye hy or sedi del tak he ponchati hy
or mujy en ki sabi gazlen bht bht achi lagen
03124169216
awesome shahzad bhae specially first ghazal is my fav. that is “ho gae jism ki poshaak badalny wali” boht zbrdst poetry h
best of luck
me w8ing 4 ur next buk….:)
kia bat hai asif bhai ap ki to har poetry hoti hi kamal ki hai ye bat kaho ke aap ki ghazal ye nazam ye koe band ye shair acha hota hai to acha nehi lagta me ko
becoz mein na ap ki shayd hi koe esi ghazal ye nazam ho ge jise ko perha na ho bhut khoob u are such a great poet,s
Allah hafiz
May Allah blessing u … Ameen
Very nice all Poetry but specially last one “Her nay more par Manzil ka gomaan hota ha” very very nice yar i like it very much. Your poetry is very nice because you write the every type of Poem/Gazal & Poet.
awsum poetry by u shehzad bhae,its a mature one it reflects ur feelings and beauty of ur inner rather creating a fantasy or coping others,especially selection of words is very good
.
best of luck for whole of ur life
May Allah bless u n ur family
پہلی مرتبہ صرف اچٹتی نظر ڈالی، مگر پھر توجہ مانگی ان غزلوں نے۔ چنانچہ توجہ سے پڑھنی پڑیں۔ فنی لحاظ سے، گو کہ کچھ مضامین روایتی ہیں، مگر عمدگی کے ساتھ آئے ہیں۔ لیکن غزلوں کا اصل حسن روایتی مضامین کا جدت کے ساتھ جڑتے جانا ہے۔ بہت عمدہ۔۔۔۔
very very nice poetry
asif sab ap ki poetry very nice. her lafaz dil me utrata hay.
ap ki poetry ko parah ker mari parani yadain taza ho jati hay.
best of luk for you,
0306-7267088
Main ne gazaleN dekheeN…. bahut pasand aayeeN… aap ko fan par graft haasil hai… aur aap ki gazaleN fkr ki gehraayiyouN se malamaal haiN… salamat raheN.. aur nawazte raheN
MashaAllah boht ashi hy bhai……bt i like the mst is the 1st one “ho gae jism ki poshak badlny wali”…!
remaining one also owesm…..gr8 job…..bst of luck 4 the nxt book…..!
our all bst wishz n prayerz r always with u…..!
hhmm bht allaaaaa 1st and 2nd r vry nyc kafi achi poetry krny lagy hain ab ap pehly ba bht achi krty thy bt ya mujy xiada achi lage ALLAH bless u always ameen
Mohtaram Usama Sahab!
Aap ko tanbeeh ki jati hai keh aainda is qisam k alfaz istemaal karnay say guraiz kijiay, basoorat-e-deegar aap ko Urdu Sukhan per Block kar diya jaay ga.
Asif Shezad Sahab aap say bhi guzarish hai keh apnay muhazzab dostoN ko yahaN mad’oo kijiay. Adab aur adaab maiN bad tehzeebi ki gunjaish nahin nikalti.
MaiN Edotorial Borad aur Nasir Malik Sahab k samnay yeh muamila paish karta hooN keh yeh mukhafaf yahaN say delete ya edit kar k Usama Sahab ko intebahi barqi khat arsaal kia jaay..
hhmm bht allaaaaa 1st and 2nd r vry nyc kafi achi poetry krny lagy hain ab ap pehly ba bht achi krty thy bt ya mujy xiada achi lage ALLAH bless u always ameen
great asif shahzad
keep it up
take care
Hafiz azam
آصف شہزاد ایک زود گو لیکن اچھا لکھنے والا شاعر ہے۔ اس کی اعری کی ایک اہم خوبی یہ ہے کہ یہ ہمہ وقت اور ہمہ صنف اپنی روایت سے جڑا ہوا ہے۔ اس کے ہاں زیادہ تر تو محبت اور اس سے متعلق مضامین ہی ملتے ہیں لیکن جب وہ ان موضوعات سے ہٹ کر شعر کہتا ہے تو بھ اپنا ایک معیار قائم رکھتا ہے۔ میں اس کے قلم کی برکتوں کے لیے دعاگو ہوں۔ شکریہ
امجد شہزاد
واہ کینٹ
dar asl kuch masrofiat ki vajha say meray dost aap ki shairi nhi parh saka.ab fursat hoi parh k jii khush hoa..ghazal oor nazm donno bohut khub.khush raho
Asif Shahzad ki shairi mein hur woh rung numaya hai jis ki aaj ki ghazal talib hai. khoobsoorat lehja, bankey misray, roshan alfaz, murannum ashhar Asif ki shairi ko char chand lagaey hoey hain. Mashallah
mujhay samajh nahee aai keh es shairy ko etnay logon ne kion paRha aor es ki tareef ki. kia yeh asif shehzad sahib edaray k manzoor e nazar shair haiN ya shair sahib ko 10000 Rs aor urdu sukhan award ka fikr daman geer hay?
bohat khob je rabt or awani ky sath bayan ka andaz dil mooh leny wala or mukhtasar or purasar . Padh kar jazbat ko ubharny ka andaz mil gaya . ALLAH dy zoor e bazo or
peli ghazal kafi umda hay qafiay ko whtiat kay sath nibhaia hay -qafia muslkil aur menat talab tha
takhial ki pqrwaz buland aur afaqi hay
baqi ghazleN parh kar comments dooN ga
Asif Shahzad sb,
ek se baDhkar ek behtareen ghazaloN se nawaza hai aapne
kamaal ke ashaa’r aur zabardast khayalaat ka muzahira pesh kiya hai
waqt ki kami ki wajah se saari ghazloN se MATLA quote kiya hai
jo rawayatoN aur maujooda daur ki bakhoobi tarjumaani karta hai
=====================================
“maine dekha hai ye har roz sahar se pahle
phool aate haiN gulistaaN meiN bashar se pahle”
“मैंने देखा है ये हर रोज़ सहर से पहले
फूल खिलते हैं गुलिस्ताँ में बशर से पहले”
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“ho gayi jism ki poshaaq badalne waali
par nahiN rooh ki khuraaq badalne waali”
“हो गयी जिस्म की पोशाक बदलने वाली
पर नहीं रूह की खुराक बदलने वाली”
=====================================
“usne maktoob meiN likha hai ki majboor haiN ham
aur baahoN meiN kisi aur ki mahsoor haiN ham”
“उसने मकतूब में लिखा है की मजबूर हैं हम
और बाहों में किसी और की महसूर हैं हम”
=====================================
“jo kuchh tha baha le gaya toofaan-e-bala dekh
ai aaNkh tu is ranj meiN ro ro ke rula dekh”
“जो कुछ था बहा ले गया तूफ़ान-ए-बला देख
ई आँख तू इस रंज में रो रो के रुला देख”
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“guloN ki bazm sajaana use pasand na tha
kisi ke pyar ko paana use pasand na tha”
“गुलों की बज़्म सजाना उसे पसंद न था
किसी के प्यार को पाना उसे पसंद न था”
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“apna use banaana gar mere bas meiN hota
lauT aata lauT aana gar mere bas meiN hota”
“अपना उसे बनाना गर मेरे बस में होता
लौट आता लौट आना गर मेरे बस में होता”
======================================
“har naye moD pe manzil ka gumaaN hota hai
zulm wo bhi hai jo be naam-o-nishaaN hota hai”
“हर नए मोड़ पे मंजिल का गुमाँ होता है
ज़ुल्म वो भी है जो बे नाम-ओ-निशाँ होता है”
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janab Asif Shahzad sb aapki ghazloN ki jitni bhi taa’reef ki jaaye kam hai, maiN tah-e-dil se mubarakbaad pesh karta hooN, qubool farmaaiye.
kia bat hai asif bhai aap ki ghazal ho ye nazam ho kamal ki hotein hain .. i like it .. har band aap ka ek dafa dil main jay kar lgta hai … bhut khush raho bhai jee
v nyc poetry by asif shahzad
jahan tak mujy lagta hy en ki poetry del sy likhi gye hy or sedi del tak he ponchati hy
or mujy en ki sabi gazlen bht bht achi lagen
03124169216
My dear Asif Shahzad
Your poetry is very nice. Thanks for sharing such a nice poetry.
awesome shahzad bhae specially first ghazal is my fav. that is “ho gae jism ki poshaak badalny wali” boht zbrdst poetry h
best of luck
me w8ing 4 ur next buk….:)
Masha Allah bahut achi site hay. Adab ki khidmat krtay rahiyay. Insha Allah sawab ki soorat main silla milay ga
kia bat hai asif bhai ap ki to har poetry hoti hi kamal ki hai ye bat kaho ke aap ki ghazal ye nazam ye koe band ye shair acha hota hai to acha nehi lagta me ko
becoz mein na ap ki shayd hi koe esi ghazal ye nazam ho ge jise ko perha na ho bhut khoob u are such a great poet,s
Allah hafiz
May Allah blessing u … Ameen
Bohat Khoub hay….Masha Allah…
Batain tou sab sach hi hain…bas samjhnay ki hain….
Keep it up…
Aap ki Shairi Masha’allah Bahut achi he. Bahut pasand aai …Keep it up..Allah Kare Zor-e-Qalam aor ziyada.
Very mature & excellent poetry. Keep it up dear Asif…
Bohat Umdah
Nice poetry.
Very nice all Poetry but specially last one “Her nay more par Manzil ka gomaan hota ha” very very nice yar i like it very much. Your poetry is very nice because you write the every type of Poem/Gazal & Poet.
awsum poetry by u shehzad bhae,its a mature one it reflects ur feelings and beauty of ur inner rather creating a fantasy or coping others,especially selection of words is very good
.
best of luck for whole of ur life
May Allah bless u n ur family
DEAR ASIF SHAHZAD
YOUR POETRY IS VERY BEST
AP KI POETRY PARH K MAI BOHAT DOOR NIKAL JATA HOO AP KI POETRY MAI BOHAT KHASHIS HAI JO MAI PURANI YADOO MAI KHO JATA HOO
BEST REGARD
ASAD ABBAS
0321 6988258
DEAR ASIF SHAHZAD
HELLO HOW ARE YOU I HOPE YOU WILL FIND
SIR AP KI POETRY MAI BOHAT JADU HAI JO MAI NE PEHLE KABHI NAHI DEKHA
ASAD ABBAS
پہلی مرتبہ صرف اچٹتی نظر ڈالی، مگر پھر توجہ مانگی ان غزلوں نے۔ چنانچہ توجہ سے پڑھنی پڑیں۔ فنی لحاظ سے، گو کہ کچھ مضامین روایتی ہیں، مگر عمدگی کے ساتھ آئے ہیں۔ لیکن غزلوں کا اصل حسن روایتی مضامین کا جدت کے ساتھ جڑتے جانا ہے۔ بہت عمدہ۔۔۔۔
very very nice poetry
asif sab ap ki poetry very nice. her lafaz dil me utrata hay.
ap ki poetry ko parah ker mari parani yadain taza ho jati hay.
best of luk for you,
0306-7267088
shahzad bhae very nice poetry….very deep wording
Main ne gazaleN dekheeN…. bahut pasand aayeeN… aap ko fan par graft haasil hai… aur aap ki gazaleN fkr ki gehraayiyouN se malamaal haiN… salamat raheN.. aur nawazte raheN
mashallah zabardast,
Mawtadel mosam meinn qaabu kiye Huwe machaltey beylagaam ehsaasat ki akkaasi kertay alfaaz ki terteeb
Maasha Allah
kya kehne asif shahzad bhai
Aap ki ghazliyaat aur nazmaiN paRheeN
ghazal ka classic rachaao bhi aur nudrat bhi
hiss-e-jamaaliyat bhi poori aab-o-taab se jagmag hay aur
zamaane ka dard bhi
Allah aap ko salaamat rkhay aur khush rakhay aamin
MashaAllah boht ashi hy bhai……bt i like the mst is the 1st one “ho gae jism ki poshak badlny wali”…!
remaining one also owesm…..gr8 job…..bst of luck 4 the nxt book…..!
our all bst wishz n prayerz r always with u…..!
hhmm bht allaaaaa 1st and 2nd r vry nyc kafi achi poetry krny lagy hain ab ap pehly ba bht achi krty thy bt ya mujy xiada achi lage ALLAH bless u always ameen
aoa great khalid shahzad
keep it up
take care
mubashir saeed
nice what a great potery nice yr
Asif, App ki shairee bay had tawana hai. Apni tkhleeqi salahiuton say bharpoor faida utha per apni shairee main mazeed nikhar paida karain.
W T F..?
Mohtaram Usama Sahab!
Aap ko tanbeeh ki jati hai keh aainda is qisam k alfaz istemaal karnay say guraiz kijiay, basoorat-e-deegar aap ko Urdu Sukhan per Block kar diya jaay ga.
Asif Shezad Sahab aap say bhi guzarish hai keh apnay muhazzab dostoN ko yahaN mad’oo kijiay. Adab aur adaab maiN bad tehzeebi ki gunjaish nahin nikalti.
MaiN Edotorial Borad aur Nasir Malik Sahab k samnay yeh muamila paish karta hooN keh yeh mukhafaf yahaN say delete ya edit kar k Usama Sahab ko intebahi barqi khat arsaal kia jaay..
nice poetry……………..
apnay ser ka koi saya bhi badalta hai bhala
meri dhartee nahi aflaak badalnay wali
bohat khoobsoorat , bohat acha
woh aik aik say milta tha pyar say laikin
hamin say haath milana usay pasand na tha
bohat khoob ji
Nice Poetry Shehzad
All the best wishes n regards 4 U
Bygoryoo kafen lashyoo ky anbaar laggy hein
taqdir ka bejja huva yeh ammer-e-fana dehk
very nice poetry dear mr shahzad sb,
hhmm bht allaaaaa 1st and 2nd r vry nyc kafi achi poetry krny lagy hain ab ap pehly ba bht achi krty thy bt ya mujy xiada achi lage ALLAH bless u always ameen
great asif shahzad
keep it up
take care
Hafiz azam
Mr Asif Shehzad
I read ur poetry that’s very nice
nice poetry…………..keep it up……….
SIR JI AP TO KAMAL KI SHYIRE KARTE HAI AUR APNI SHYIRI K ZARIYE SUB KA DIL JEET LETE HO KIA BAAT HAI AP K ZAHEN KI
ASAD ABBAS
VERY NICE POETRY ASIF BHAI AISE HI MAHNAT KARTE JAO AP BOHAT ACHE SHYAR HO
ASAD ABBAS
ASIF BHAI HUMARI DUAN AP K SATH HAI JANAB
ASAD ABBAS
HAI MERE PESH E NAZAR SAFHA E ASIF SHAHZAD
UN KE ASH’AAR HAIN YEH UN KE QALAM KA AIJAAZ
NUDRAT E FIKR O NAZAR UN KI GHAZAL KA JAUHAR
UN KA ANDAZ E BAYAAN ROOH E SUKHAN KA GHAMMAZ
kHAKSAAR
AHMAD ALI BARQI AZMI
mashallah boht khoob.
mashallah
آصف شہزاد ایک زود گو لیکن اچھا لکھنے والا شاعر ہے۔ اس کی اعری کی ایک اہم خوبی یہ ہے کہ یہ ہمہ وقت اور ہمہ صنف اپنی روایت سے جڑا ہوا ہے۔ اس کے ہاں زیادہ تر تو محبت اور اس سے متعلق مضامین ہی ملتے ہیں لیکن جب وہ ان موضوعات سے ہٹ کر شعر کہتا ہے تو بھ اپنا ایک معیار قائم رکھتا ہے۔ میں اس کے قلم کی برکتوں کے لیے دعاگو ہوں۔ شکریہ
امجد شہزاد
واہ کینٹ
dar asl kuch masrofiat ki vajha say meray dost aap ki shairi nhi parh saka.ab fursat hoi parh k jii khush hoa..ghazal oor nazm donno bohut khub.khush raho
its a very nice poetry really u have a very nice way of conveing your message. A very very nice poem which has touched me deeply
Pharrpharra bhi na saky zibah k doraan shahzad
us ne par kaat k rakhwa dye sar se pehly………
awsome………………loved it……………. boht khooob hai andaz e bayaan Shahzad tera………….. GEo…………..
BOHOT HE ALA BHOT HE KHOOB.
bohat achi hai asif bhai bohat aala
wah wah bohat zabardast .hemsha ki tarhan behtreen poetry hai
Dear Asif …….
u r a great man ……..i like your poetry …………its really heart touching….
thanks 4 sharing such a nice poetry……………………
From Haseeb
nice poetry asif bhai ………….. great work……………..
very nyc…….
nice ………………… asif bhai…………….really nice one
bohut shandar takhleeq hai shehzad sb, gazal or nazm dono mai aapko allah ne hunar baqsha hai….allah kare zor e shbab or zeyada….AMEEN
ماشا اللہ جناب بہت اچھی غزلین نظمیں ہیں مری دعا ہے کہ ،، اللہ آپ کے حرف کو روشن کرے ،، ۔۔۔۔۔ ،، آمین ،،۔
acchi poetry hi buhat khoub….allaha karin zoor-e-qalam aor zayada ho……wish you good luck…my dear,,,,thanks for shairing…..
bohat khoobsorat shairi hay,
آصف تم اچھے شعر کہتے ہو۔۔۔۔۔۔تھوڑے سے عرصے میں کافی نام بنایا ہے تم نے ۔۔۔۔سلامت رہویارا
اصف صاحب حوبصورت لہجے کے شاعر ہیں اُپ ۔۔۔۔۔ یوں ہی نوازتیں رہیں
Asif Shahzad ki shairi mein hur woh rung numaya hai jis ki aaj ki ghazal talib hai. khoobsoorat lehja, bankey misray, roshan alfaz, murannum ashhar Asif ki shairi ko char chand lagaey hoey hain. Mashallah
Jeetay rahiey…aur likhtey riahiey
suhail saqib
dammam, saudi arabia
Nice one.
آصف صاحب بہت ہی خوب لکھا ہے۔اللہ کرے زور قلم اور زیادہ
ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
bahot khoob Asif, bahot khoobsurat shaairy hai aap ki MASHA ALLAH,achha laga paRh ke,
ALLAH karey zor-e-qalam aor ziyaadah.
bahot khush , aabaad rahiye.
dua go,
Ishtiaq Zain.
mujhay samajh nahee aai keh es shairy ko etnay logon ne kion paRha aor es ki tareef ki. kia yeh asif shehzad sahib edaray k manzoor e nazar shair haiN ya shair sahib ko 10000 Rs aor urdu sukhan award ka fikr daman geer hay?
har naye moodh per manzil ka guman hota hy
bohat khob je rabt or awani ky sath bayan ka andaz dil mooh leny wala or mukhtasar or purasar . Padh kar jazbat ko ubharny ka andaz mil gaya . ALLAH dy zoor e bazo or
peli ghazal kafi umda hay qafiay ko whtiat kay sath nibhaia hay -qafia muslkil aur menat talab tha
takhial ki pqrwaz buland aur afaqi hay
baqi ghazleN parh kar comments dooN ga
Asif Shahzad , bohat umda kalam hy, aap ko ghazal or nazam donon asnaf e sukahan per malka hasil hy, aap ka kalam parh ker sarur aa gia hy……
AASIF MUIYAN-AAPKI DONO GHAZALEN BAHUT ACHCHI HAIN-ALLAH KARE ZOR E KALAM AUR ZIYADAH-
Asif Shahzad sb,
ek se baDhkar ek behtareen ghazaloN se nawaza hai aapne
kamaal ke ashaa’r aur zabardast khayalaat ka muzahira pesh kiya hai
waqt ki kami ki wajah se saari ghazloN se MATLA quote kiya hai
jo rawayatoN aur maujooda daur ki bakhoobi tarjumaani karta hai
=====================================
“maine dekha hai ye har roz sahar se pahle
phool aate haiN gulistaaN meiN bashar se pahle”
“मैंने देखा है ये हर रोज़ सहर से पहले
फूल खिलते हैं गुलिस्ताँ में बशर से पहले”
=====================================
“ho gayi jism ki poshaaq badalne waali
par nahiN rooh ki khuraaq badalne waali”
“हो गयी जिस्म की पोशाक बदलने वाली
पर नहीं रूह की खुराक बदलने वाली”
=====================================
“usne maktoob meiN likha hai ki majboor haiN ham
aur baahoN meiN kisi aur ki mahsoor haiN ham”
“उसने मकतूब में लिखा है की मजबूर हैं हम
और बाहों में किसी और की महसूर हैं हम”
=====================================
“jo kuchh tha baha le gaya toofaan-e-bala dekh
ai aaNkh tu is ranj meiN ro ro ke rula dekh”
“जो कुछ था बहा ले गया तूफ़ान-ए-बला देख
ई आँख तू इस रंज में रो रो के रुला देख”
======================================
“guloN ki bazm sajaana use pasand na tha
kisi ke pyar ko paana use pasand na tha”
“गुलों की बज़्म सजाना उसे पसंद न था
किसी के प्यार को पाना उसे पसंद न था”
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“apna use banaana gar mere bas meiN hota
lauT aata lauT aana gar mere bas meiN hota”
“अपना उसे बनाना गर मेरे बस में होता
लौट आता लौट आना गर मेरे बस में होता”
======================================
“har naye moD pe manzil ka gumaaN hota hai
zulm wo bhi hai jo be naam-o-nishaaN hota hai”
“हर नए मोड़ पे मंजिल का गुमाँ होता है
ज़ुल्म वो भी है जो बे नाम-ओ-निशाँ होता है”
======================================
janab Asif Shahzad sb aapki ghazloN ki jitni bhi taa’reef ki jaaye kam hai, maiN tah-e-dil se mubarakbaad pesh karta hooN, qubool farmaaiye.
Mashallah bohut khoob bhai salamat rahein
aap ki poetry bohat umda hy janab….. parh ker sarur aa gia
dear Asif Shahzad
boht khubsurat kalam hay. boht se ashaar pasand aaye.
keep it up
allah kre zor-e-qalam aur ziada
boring poetry, why the thousands people read it? Is the poet belongs to the websites administration?
sir what nice poetry of you i read your poetry many newspapers you are good poet
be tassar shairy, be rabt misray, khuda janay es shairy ko urdusukhan etna barha charha kar kion paish kar rahi hay?
kia bat hai asif bhai aap ki ghazal ho ye nazam ho kamal ki hotein hain .. i like it .. har band aap ka ek dafa dil main jay kar lgta hai … bhut khush raho bhai jee
bilkul be maqsad aor ghar mutawazan shairy hay. http://www.urdusukhan.com aik boht mayari website hay. es pr kalam daikh bhal kar lagaya jana chahey.
HAI MERE PESH E NAZAR SAFHA E ASIF SHAHZAD
UN KE ASH’AAR HAIN YEH UN KE QALAM KA AIJAAZ
NUDRAT E FIKR O NAZAR UN KI GHAZAL KA JAUHAR
UN KA ANDAZ E BAYAAN ROOH E SUKHAN KA GHAMMAZ
kHAKSAAR
AHMAD ALI BARQI AZMI
What is this? poetry? or schizophrenia?
dear how can i purchase your this book in UK?
wha asif bahi buhat kamal ki shairy hi