Gulzar Malik | Basi Handia | باسی ہنڈیا ۔۔۔ از: گلزار ملک

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   imran ahmad

   Posted August 26, 2011 at 1:01 PM

   malik sahib,
   afsana , nafseaate , gensi gerhoon ko kholta howa agy berta hie. kafi fslen hai , baher hal nbhaya koob hai, khas ker anjam koob hai. aek do jga typing mistake hai jesy serteing key jga sen-ting ana chayee. baher hall apni shkseeat say belkl alt lekh deya hai. allah nzer bd say bcauy.

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   Shahzad Aslam

   Posted August 26, 2011 at 9:54 PM

   Malik sahib no doubt this is a good afsana, presented in your own diction. The way you express this BASI PN of emotions in life is very impressive and amazing. Thanks for sharing this tragedic truth.
   Regards.

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   nadeem khan

   Posted September 6, 2011 at 11:35 AM

   Gulzar malik ka afsana” basi handia” maanwi lehaz say pert der pert clny wala afsana haiy. boaht kum loog esay mozoo per kam ki hamat kerty hain. zaat k hwaly say jenseeat sub ko psand hai lekin as per bat ho too sbi chery cpaty perty hain. phr ye such atna qdeem hai k assmaan say zameen per hmary nzool ka karn b bna. kehty hain jnis ka ta-aliq ansani nfseyat say bohat gehra hai, afsan perker as ka andaza koob howa. malik sb ko as umda peshkush per mubark bad. afsan almi hwaly say her kswaty per poora aterta haiy

   Nadeem Khan

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   Ajmal Sarosh

   Posted September 19, 2011 at 8:39 AM

   گلزار ملک بہت اچھے افسانہ نگار ہیں اور نثر پر ان کی گرفت ایک امرمسلّم ہے۔ ان کا افسانہ باسی ہنڈیاحلقہ ارباب ذوق فیصل آباد میں پیش کیا گیا تھا نہایت ہی خوبصورت اور دلچسپ افسانہ ہے۔ اردو سخن پر ان کو اور ان کے اس افسانہ کو پڑھ کر بہت خوشی ہوئی۔ امید کرتے ہیں کہ ان کے افسانے اردو سخن پر پڑھنے کے لئے ملتے رہیں گے۔

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   Bashir Hussain Bhutta

   Posted September 20, 2011 at 4:57 PM

   Malik sahib no doubt it is very good afsana. i hope you will be write so more afsanay.
   Thanks

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     Gulzar malik

     Posted September 22, 2011 at 7:00 AM

     Basi handia per comments deny waly sub ahbab ka sukria

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   Yashia Kumara Narsinha

   Posted December 7, 2011 at 2:45 PM

   acha kahanian hay basi handia, dil ko acca laga hay. mubarik hay aap ko.

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   zafar Ajamy

   Posted December 9, 2011 at 11:37 AM

   Malik sahib afsana baase handia parra , pasand aaia, jinsiaat par abdbe hawaalay say bohat say logon nay taba aazmzzi ki hay , in main say ziaada tar to lazzat pasandde ki athaah ghaateio main gir gay, oar apnay saath ;ham to doobay hain sanam tum ko bhe lay doobain gain; kay misdaak qaaraeen key fikree zawaal ka bhe sabab banay .Maadooday chand aisay naam hain jin kay qalam nay is pulsraat par tawaazun barqraar rakha, aap mubaarik baad kay mustahiq hain kay aap nay aik jinsee alamiay ko aik adeeb ke aankh say daikha hay oar aik adeeb kay palam say likha hay,,jins ka hawaala adna tallazzaz pasnde say bohat bulaand hay, is naazuk farq ko aap nay khoob nibhaia hay , aik hassas mozu aik achchee tahreer parnay ko mile , thanks

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   betty knoeh

   Posted December 12, 2011 at 11:53 AM

   Hello my dear
   How are you?
   My name is Betty. I am a single woman just came across your profile today at (www.urdusukhan.com) and became interested in you, and I would like to add you as my friend and establish a lasting relationship with you.You can reach me at my email box at (betty_koneh39@yahoo.com). Please, if you’re interested in learning more about me OK, so I can send you my picture and tell you more about me. I’ll be waiting to hear from you with love,
   (betty_koneh39@yahoo.com)
   Yours Lovely
   Betty.

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   betty knoeh

   Posted December 12, 2011 at 11:56 AM

   Hello Dearest,
   Complement of the the day to you. How are you today? I believe that you are doing well. I am more than happy to read your mail today after writing you a mail . My dear I am very happy to hear from you today and i want to let you know that your mail has really gingered my heart since after reading it.

   When two souls, which have sought each other for,however long in the throng, have finally found each other …a union, fiery and pure as they themselves are… begins on earth and continues forever in heaven.

   Well, like i told you in my first mail, My name is Miss Betty Koneh from Ivory Coast in West Africa. I am 23 years old girl 5’8″ tall. I liked your profile that is what interested me to pick you to be my future partner. Presently i am residing in the refugee camp here in Dakar Senegal.

   As a result of the civil war going on in my country. My late father Dr Oliver Koneh was the personal adviser to the former head of state (Late Dr Robert Guei) before the rebels attacked our house one early morning and killed him alongside with my mother. It is only me that is alive now and i managed to make my way to a near by country Senegal where i am living now

   I won’t ever forget what it was like before you or how I would feel without you. I won’t ever let a day go by without telling you how very much you mean to me, how very deeply I love you, and how very much I need you. You need never doubt the way I am feeling about you, how much happier I will be with you in my life. I love you now and always.

   Please I will like to know more about you. Your likes and dislikes and what you are doing presently I will tell you more about myself in my next mail. My hobbies are love, trust and honesty. Attached here is my picture.

   I will forever be right by your side and I’ll feel so whole when you are near by my side as it will all feels so good and so true.How can I thank you? For the many dreams for such wonderful times. Even if I should awake to be alone and scared you will be there in my fondest hopes and memories.

   I have no doubt that with you by my side and your help by the grace of God I will come out of this refugee camp in a shortest moment. I don’t think that i would have been how happy i am today if i have not come in contact with you. I would have find this life very difficult with just so many emotions tumbling through my mind.

   Waiting for your reply. I wish you the best of your day and a happy moment over there. Please i am waiting to hear from you soonest
   Yours sincerely,
   Betty

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    Gulzar malik

    Posted December 12, 2011 at 12:00 PM

    Hello Dearest, betty,
    My dear, all your felling on my hart fall like morning dues but the death of you father and mother is very sad moment for a along hart like you and unrecoverable loss.God may bless their souls in haven.I think your ppa and maa both eyes alway on you. the death is not the end of life. it is only a door to an other world.both are always stand with you and participate with your difficulties and feeling at every moment. Betty you are not feel, your speed is very high in respect of trust and love on unknown person.Betty i am not a man on which any person trust, even a doll like girl, who live in a refugee champ. I live in universe of thought. A short story writer, i thank not a practical men and always sleeping in imaginary worlds.You are young and beautiful, please slow down/ cool down in you feeling and trust.Peoples have more than one faces. Complement of the the day to you also. I am also happy to read your mail today.Betty you know, here in my mother language ” betty” mean ” daughter”.
    Yours sincerely,
    Gulzar malik

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      Babar Jahangir

      Posted January 10, 2012 at 8:40 AM

      Dear Gulzar Malik sb, assalaam-o-alaikum, I just want to bring your kind attention towards scam attempt in comments on your ‘Afsana.
      “betty knoeh” is just another scammer of the series of African scammers. Please never give your personal details or any kind of bank information. You can search on web for more details about such scammers. Thanks & regards – Babar Jahangir

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    SYED M.Y.SABA

    Posted December 19, 2011 at 2:14 AM

    You are a prominent Urdu fiction writer, critic and scholar. Keep continue your writing short stories try to come into main stream. Soon you will got cognize as a symbolic writer. And will receive many awards from all over the world. Really you are one is the best among your contemporary