36 Comments

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   iqbal tariq

   Posted January 18, 2012 at 8:57 AM

   ایک اچھی شاعرہ کا بہت ہی اچھا کلام

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     aroosa durrani

     Posted February 14, 2012 at 7:20 AM

     bohat hi khubsurar kalam kya baat hy ….

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       aleena itrat rizvi

       Posted February 14, 2012 at 10:13 AM

       aroosa durrani ji ,bahot shukriya aapka,nawazish

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   sabeen mustafa

   Posted January 18, 2012 at 9:20 AM

   its a very beautiful and nice creation…superb

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted January 18, 2012 at 10:58 AM

     thanks a lot sabeen mustafa sahiba….for ur nice words.

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   aleena itrat rizvi

   Posted January 18, 2012 at 11:01 AM

   اقبال طارق صاحب…آپکا بہت بہت شکریہ ،نوازش

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   Kashif Iqbal

   Posted January 18, 2012 at 11:28 AM

   nazam bhi khubsoorat hy aor desinging bhi lajawab hay.

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   aleena itrat rizvi

   Posted January 18, 2012 at 12:07 PM

   kashif iqbal sb. bahot bahot shukriya

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   QAIS RAZA

   Posted January 18, 2012 at 12:41 PM

   bahot khoob…..Aleena baji……MUBARAK HO………SHUKRIYA URDU SUKHAN………

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted January 19, 2012 at 11:51 AM

     شکریہ…. قیص رضا، آپکا بہت بہت

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   Rafi Haider Anjum

   Posted January 18, 2012 at 4:34 PM

   Yeh nazm mai pahle bhi paRh chuka hoo’n aur apne ta’assurat ka izhaar bhi kar chuka hoo’n,lekin aaj bhi paRh kar utna hi lut’f aaya,jitna pahli baar mahsoos hua tha.Ek achchi takhleeq ki khoobi bhi yahi hai ke use baar baar paRhne ko dil chahe aur har baar ek nayee taazgi ka ehsaas ho.

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted January 19, 2012 at 11:53 AM

     شکریہ…. رفی حیدر انجم صاحب آپکا بہت بہت ،نوازش

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   adnan khan

   Posted February 9, 2012 at 8:01 PM

   very nice ghazal hai aap ki…………..congratulation

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 13, 2012 at 4:58 AM

     SHUKRIYA ADNAN KHAN JI …NAZM KI PASANDEEDGI KE LIYE

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   adnan khan

   Posted February 9, 2012 at 8:04 PM

   please send me you,s other poetry too.

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 13, 2012 at 5:00 AM

     FOR MORE POETRY U CAN JOIN MY PAGE OR CAN WAIT FOR MORE POSTINGS ON URDU SUKHAN.COM..THNX

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    zahoor abbas zaidi

    Posted February 14, 2012 at 3:41 AM

    tashnagi aur bhi hai

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 14, 2012 at 6:20 AM

      zahoor abbas zaidi ji
      urdu sukhan se jude rahiye ,adab ki tishnegi ko bujhane ka behtreen zariya hai ,SHUKRIYA

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    AnwarAhmad

    Posted February 16, 2012 at 5:25 AM

    Bhot khob kaha apne

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 16, 2012 at 9:11 AM

      janab anwar ahmad ji ..bahot shukriya aapka…

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    Mudasir aga

    Posted February 17, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    Wajoode zan se hy tasveere kaynat main rang. Buhut khoob nazam

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 21, 2012 at 9:59 AM

      janab mudasir aga ji…shukriya:)

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    zahoor abbas zaidi

    Posted February 19, 2012 at 4:06 AM

    bahut hi khubsurat hai

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 21, 2012 at 10:00 AM

      zahoor abbas zaidi bhai bahot shukriya aapka

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    mohd fazil rizvi

    Posted February 20, 2012 at 2:05 AM

    beautiful creation with beautiful thought…very nice

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 21, 2012 at 10:03 AM

      janab fazil rizvi ji ..thnx a lot

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    Rashid Farooq

    Posted February 24, 2012 at 4:31 AM

    Aleena ji!Your poetry is superb.GOD BLESS YOU &YOUR FAMILY.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 24, 2012 at 8:54 AM

      janab rashid farooq ji …izzat afzai ka bahot bahot shukriya

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    Rana

    Posted March 7, 2012 at 10:58 PM

    ایک اچھی شاعرہ کا بہت ہی اچھا کلام

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 25, 2012 at 5:06 AM

      janab rana ji ,bahot bahot shukriya

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    Syed Haider ali shah

    Posted March 10, 2012 at 1:12 AM

    Boht he aala or shandar ghazal…

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 25, 2012 at 5:09 AM

      syed haider ali shah ji ,SHUKRIYA

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    Faiyaz Kazi

    Posted March 11, 2012 at 3:59 PM

    bohot umda

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 25, 2012 at 5:10 AM

      JANAB FAIYAZ KAZI JI ,SHUKRIYA

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    Ahtasham dhama

    Posted March 24, 2012 at 9:27 AM

    boht khub dad qabol kijen

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 25, 2012 at 5:11 AM

      JANAB AHTASHAM DHAMA JI SHUKRIYA