Aleena Itrat Rizvi | Ghazal | Shaam Dhalay….

184 Comments

1. Reply

   sabeen mustafa

   Posted February 9, 2012 at 11:23 AM

   wht a beautiful creation with beautiful presentation …very nice

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 10, 2012 at 5:52 AM

     thanks a lot sabeen mustafa for ur nice words..

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       maqsood ahmad

       Posted September 8, 2012 at 6:59 AM

       buat pyari gazal ha Aleena ji , very lovely

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     Huda.

     Posted May 23, 2012 at 11:20 AM

     Rea££y nice ghazals he mahotrama .padh kar acha laga.

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       aleena itrat rizvi

       Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:12 AM

       huda ji bht shukriya

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   huma rizvi

   Posted February 9, 2012 at 12:18 PM

   bahot khoobsurat ghazal hai …saare hi ashaar umda hain ..daad aur mubarakbad

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 10, 2012 at 5:54 AM

     thanks a lot huma rizvi

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       ahmad rizwan

       Posted February 22, 2012 at 1:38 AM

       saydda khobsorat ghazal hy…rukh sy ik aanch si aati hy yonhi sham dhaly….lajawab….

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         aleena itrat rizvi

         Posted February 22, 2012 at 12:48 PM

         AHMAD RIZWAN JI ,GHAZAL KI PASANDEEDGI KE LIYE AAPKA SHUKRIYA

         • NASIR RASHDI

           Posted July 7, 2012 at 1:29 PM

           BUHAT KHOOB RIZVI SAHIBA

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   adnan khan

   Posted February 9, 2012 at 8:16 PM

   very nice too .thank u aleena ji

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 10, 2012 at 6:08 AM

     shukriya adnan khan ji,

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   jamal ahamad bittu

   Posted February 13, 2012 at 6:04 AM

   aap shayri ko parwaz de rahi ho

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 13, 2012 at 8:42 AM

     jamal ahmad bittu ji ..shukriya

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   Nadeem

   Posted February 14, 2012 at 4:41 AM

   Aleena ji. You are perfect shaira. Very nice wording. Really dilruba.. Stay blessed..

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 14, 2012 at 6:16 AM

     Janab Nadeem ji,
     bahot shukriya aapne is kavish par apni khoobsurat raaye zahir ki ,mamnoon hoon…

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   khalid

   Posted February 15, 2012 at 1:52 PM

   vry nice

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 16, 2012 at 7:16 AM

     janab khalid sb thnx

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   Rashid Farooq

   Posted February 16, 2012 at 3:56 AM

   Aleena Itrat Rizvi poetry is original and heart touching.Her observations about human s entiments are very much realistic.May ALLAH ALMIGHTY bless her.No doubt she is an asset for URDU POETRY& LITERARY COMMUNITY.

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 16, 2012 at 7:18 AM

     janab farooq rashid sb aapka zuq qabil e daad hai …aapka tahe dil se shukriya

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       Rashid Farooq

       Posted February 16, 2012 at 12:47 PM

       Aleena Sahiba!Your poetry is much above apprecition.Keep it. up.Weldone.ALLAH KARAY ZUREY SUKHAN ORE B ZIADA.AMEEN.

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         aleena itrat rizvi

         Posted February 16, 2012 at 4:54 PM

         rashid farooq ji ..shukriya

         • aleena

           Posted September 30, 2012 at 6:37 AM

           please write a poem for me

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   TARIQ RIZVI

   Posted February 16, 2012 at 2:32 PM

   Your poetry is original and heart touching.Her observations about human s entiments are very much.

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 18, 2012 at 7:59 AM

     janab tariq rizvi ji ….thanks a lot for ur nice words ,may ALLAH bless u…:)

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   shahnawaz khan

   Posted February 16, 2012 at 4:44 PM

   ek or beautifull gajal kya baat hai. Alena ji bahut khub

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     aleena itrat rizvi

     Posted February 18, 2012 at 8:00 AM

     janab shahnawaz khan ji …shukriya,nawazish:)

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    Hadi Javed

    Posted February 17, 2012 at 8:28 PM

    waah bahut khub…….. aapka kalaam zahan o dil ko mutaasir karta hai …… khuda aapko aur taraqqi se nawaze aamin Aleena Itrat sahiba bahut bahut mubarak is takhleeq ke liye

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 21, 2012 at 10:06 AM

      janab hadi javed sb. aapka bahot bahot shukriya

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    AB SIDDIQUI

    Posted February 19, 2012 at 2:31 PM

    umda kalam hai mashallah

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 21, 2012 at 10:07 AM

      JANAB AB SIDDIQUI JI …SHUKRIYA

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    mohd fazil rizvi

    Posted February 20, 2012 at 2:03 AM

    bahot khoobsurat ghazal hai …sabhi ashaar bahot umda hain ,cngrts

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 21, 2012 at 10:08 AM

      JANAB FAZIL RIZVI JI …THNX A LOT

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    Nadeem

    Posted February 22, 2012 at 12:27 PM

    Aleena Ji please write any new ghazal.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 22, 2012 at 12:42 PM

      NADEEM JI ….INSHALLAH JALDI HI AAPKI FAMAISH POORI HO JAYEGI ….SHUKRIYA

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    ahtsham

    Posted February 22, 2012 at 6:48 PM

    بہت عمدہ اور خوبصورت غزل ہے ..کامیابی سے کہی ھوئی بحر ھے

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 23, 2012 at 8:21 AM

      janab ahtsham ji …bahot bahot shukriya

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    zahoor abbas zaidi

    Posted February 23, 2012 at 2:59 PM

    very nice shabaash

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 24, 2012 at 1:34 PM

      shukriya

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    haseen ahmed

    Posted February 28, 2012 at 6:37 PM

    mohtarma vaqai aapka koi jawab nahi bas hame itna hi kahna hai

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 8, 2012 at 8:42 AM

      haseen ahmad ji bahot bahot shukriya

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    pankaj sharma

    Posted February 29, 2012 at 3:21 PM

    bahut khoob mohtarma,aap ki yeh ghazal vakaya hi nihayat umda aur khoobsoorat hai.agar ho sake to mujh na-cheez se khat-o-khitabat ke zariye raafta rakhiye aur kuch hamain bhi sikhaiye,shukriya.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 8, 2012 at 8:43 AM

      bahot shukriya pankaj sharma ji hazal ki pasandeedgi ke liye

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    Rana

    Posted March 6, 2012 at 12:29 PM

    Bohat khoabsurat ghazal kahe Aleena jee aap ny es ka her Shaer khuad aik ghazal hai,

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      Rana

      Posted March 8, 2012 at 5:08 PM

      es beautiful Ghazal ka betrein Shaer,

      خوش تھے ہم تیرے تصور تیری تصویر کے ساتھ

      آج کیوں جان یہ جاتی ہے یونہی شام ڈھلے

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 16, 2012 at 10:17 AM

      shukriya rana sahab bahot bahot

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    Bahar Alam

    Posted March 8, 2012 at 8:36 AM

    Dear Sister Assalam Alaikum…I m very glad to read this “Ghazal”..really u r a great poet of Urdu. This ghazal is touching heart and so nice. Jazakallah khair

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 16, 2012 at 10:19 AM

      shukriya bahar aalam ji

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    momin siddique

    Posted March 8, 2012 at 1:54 PM

    masha allah bahot pyare khayal hain aapke aur mai dil se duwa karta hu ki aap bahot tarakki karein a.h.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 16, 2012 at 10:20 AM

      shukriya momin siddiqui ji

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    rasool saqi

    Posted March 9, 2012 at 12:12 PM

    shandar nisayee ghazal hai….matla ta maqta hadees e dilbaran….bahut khoob.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 16, 2012 at 10:21 AM

      shukriya janab rasool saqi ji

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    Syed Haider ali shah

    Posted March 10, 2012 at 1:25 AM

    Very nice… Beautiful

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 16, 2012 at 10:22 AM

      shukriya janab haider ali shah ji

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    Khawaja nazimuddin Nazim

    Posted March 10, 2012 at 9:59 AM

    خوبصورت غزل کہنے پر بہن علینا کو بہت ساری داد

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 16, 2012 at 10:23 AM

      shukriya janab khwaja nazimuddin nazim ji

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      shahid

      Posted April 13, 2012 at 3:52 PM

      khwaja sb how are you 009203469203407

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    Zamir Talib sial

    Posted March 17, 2012 at 1:44 AM

    Alina ji aap meri nazar me is ghazal aor aisi poetry se kahin aagey ki shaera hen-aap ik pukhta kar shaera hen
    Zamir Talib Manchastar uk

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 20, 2012 at 5:35 AM

      JANAB ZAMIR TALIB SIAL JI BAHOT SHUKRIYA AAPKA

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        zahoor Ahmed

        Posted March 25, 2012 at 5:08 AM

        Aleena gi ap K Sada narm o nazuk Our Pur Asar Alfaz Ham Jesey Urdu se Na balad Logo K Bhi Barah-e- Rast Dil Me Utar Jata He,, bohut Khoob .

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    Shaukat Ali Naz

    Posted March 19, 2012 at 12:02 PM

    Aik Awaz yeh Aati hy younhi shaam dhaly…

    Masha Allah bohat khobsurat ghazal….Dheroon Duain Aap ke liay.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 20, 2012 at 5:36 AM

      JANAB SHAUKAT ALI NAZ JI BAHOT BAHOT SHUKRIYA

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    Ghosiya Ali Sabeen

    Posted March 22, 2012 at 11:55 AM

    Bohat khoabsurat ghazal kahe Aleena Aapi aapne MashaAllh,,

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 24, 2012 at 5:19 AM

      GHOSIYA SABEEN ALI …AAPKA SHUKRIYA BAHOT BAHOT

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    irfan ahmad irfan

    Posted March 22, 2012 at 8:29 PM

    gazal

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    irfan ahmad irfan

    Posted March 22, 2012 at 8:32 PM

    har bat py darta hon

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    Syed Khadim Hussain Shah

    Posted March 23, 2012 at 3:20 AM

    Aadab.

    Bohat Umda Kawish paish kee hai.
    Deep Thinking.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 24, 2012 at 5:21 AM

      JANAB SYED KHALID HUSAIN SHAH JI BAHOT BAHOT SHUKRIYA

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    aleena itrat rizvi

    Posted March 24, 2012 at 5:20 AM

    IRFAN AHMAD IRFAN JI ….THNX A LOT

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    nabeel

    Posted March 26, 2012 at 8:33 AM

    bahut hi umda collection

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 30, 2012 at 7:54 AM

      shukriya nabeel ji

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    mohd anis

    Posted March 27, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    mashaallah

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 30, 2012 at 7:55 AM

      shukriya mohd anis ji

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    muhammad khalid javid

    Posted April 13, 2012 at 12:41 PM

    aslam o alaikum aleena g aaj bhut der baad achhi shairy parrney ko mili ALLAH KAREY ZOOR E QALAM OR ZIADA GOD BLEES U

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted April 17, 2012 at 12:42 PM

      walekumsalam khalid javaid ji …shukriya aapka bahut bahut

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    shahid

    Posted April 13, 2012 at 3:51 PM

    00923469203407

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    AIYAZ ANSARI

    Posted April 23, 2012 at 12:10 PM

    Assalam Alaikum,
    Bahut he Dard Bhari Ghazal post karne ka sukhriya, (Allah swt) Apke zora kalam mei Aur Nikhar Ayes, Aminn..

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted May 14, 2012 at 12:28 PM

      ayaz ansari ji …ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka shukriya,salamat rahen

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    Sajjad Hussain

    Posted May 5, 2012 at 1:38 AM

    subuh subuh hoti hy , sham sham hoti,,
    bs guzarta hy uun din ,unhi ,rat hoti hy,,

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted May 14, 2012 at 12:29 PM

      janab sajjad husain sb. shukriya

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    Hafiz Muzaffar mohsin

    Posted May 12, 2012 at 4:45 AM

    Bohat Khoob …..Nice Poetry……

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted May 14, 2012 at 12:29 PM

      janab hafiz muzaffar mohsin sb ..shukriya

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 2, 2012 at 12:42 PM

      janab hafiz muzaffar mohsin ji shukriya aapka

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    Syed Mubashir Shah "SAAHIR"

    Posted May 20, 2012 at 6:55 AM

    Respected Aleena Ji
    Thanks for Sharing A good Ghazal. Really You are a nice Poet. I also create poetry but dont know it is able to publish or not……..? how I can share my poetry with you for your kind guidelines? if possible, so please tel me.

    thanks with Regards.

    Mubashir Shah Saahir

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 2, 2012 at 12:43 PM

      syed muzaffar shah mohsin ji shukriya

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:11 AM

      janab mubashshir shah saahil ji shukriya

39. Reply

    Hafeez Khan

    Posted May 21, 2012 at 2:47 AM

    Bohat Khoob Aleena.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 2, 2012 at 12:44 PM

      hafeez khan ji shukriya

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    mateen zaidi

    Posted May 21, 2012 at 2:50 AM

    bahut khub.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 2, 2012 at 12:45 PM

      mateen zaidi ji thnx

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    Dr. Mohsin Khan

    Posted May 22, 2012 at 9:31 AM

    Har baar ki tarah, aapkee sonch ka koi jawab nahi. Allah hazaron-lakhon me ayesee soanch jo alfazon me tabdeel hoti hain. Soanch to har koi rakhta hain lekin alfazoan ka milap lajawab hain. Allah aapki zindagi pur sukun rakhe,

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 2, 2012 at 12:45 PM

      dr.mohsin khan ji shukriya

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    asif Naru

    Posted May 24, 2012 at 2:45 PM

    urdu adab main Aleena Itrat Rizvi ke share achouta or munfrad hasiat ke Hamil hai. main Miss Aleena ke Khoubsorat Kavish per Dad-E-Tehseen paesh kerta Hun.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 2, 2012 at 12:46 PM

      asif naru ji shukriya

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    Hafeez Khan

    Posted May 30, 2012 at 1:07 AM

    Very nice site it is. I got so many new things from this site. Thanks for its introduction my dear friend Aleena.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:01 AM

      hafeez khan ji bahut bahut shukriya

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    syed khundmeer arshad

    Posted June 2, 2012 at 8:44 AM

    SALAAM O ALAIKUM ALEENA JI , OMEED KE AAP BA KHAIR HOONGE, JAB SE AAP KE KALAAM , ASHAAR , GAZALS FACE BOOK PAR PADA HOON AAP KI SHAIRY KA DIWANA HOOGAYA HOON , AAP KI SHAIRY ME KUCH NA KUCH QHAAS BAAT HAI JO SAB KO MUTASER KIYE BINA NAHI RAKHSAKTI. AAP MUSHAIROON ME SHIRKAT KIYAOON NAHI KARTE…. , KUDA SE DUWA HAI KE AAP KA YE JAZBA SHAIRY KHOOB PARWAAN CHADE. ( AMEEN )

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    anwerali

    Posted June 3, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    ALEENA ITS A WOUNDERFUL GHAZAL AND I AM REALY IMPRESSED WITH IT AND I PRAY TO ALMIGHTY ALLAH TO GIVE MORE POWER TO YOU CLAM AND YOU MAY STAY BLESSED AMEEN.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 4, 2012 at 3:50 PM

      anwer ali ji bht shukriya janab

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    aleena itrat rizvi

    Posted June 4, 2012 at 3:50 PM

    syed khandmeer arshad ji bht bht shukriya,nawazish

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    Rozina sarfaraz

    Posted June 4, 2012 at 4:02 PM

    Bht umdah daad hazir hai qabool kare

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      HAIDERMUMTAZSYED

      Posted June 7, 2012 at 7:20 PM

      KIA KEHNY LAJAWAB POETRY HAI DUAA HAI ISE TERHAN AAP AAPNA KALAM F.B. PER DETI RAHEYE GOD BLESS U ALEENA ITRAT RIZVI JI

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        aleena itrat rizvi

        Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:10 AM

        haider mumtaz syed ji shukriya

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:09 AM

      rozina sarfaraz ji bht shukriya aap ka

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    Raja zulfiqar Ali

    Posted June 4, 2012 at 4:59 PM

    Salam. Aap ki tammam Gazlen bohat pasand haien. Mula aur qlam mae zoor paeda kare

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:08 AM

      janab raja zulfiqar ali sb ..zarranawazi ka shukriya

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    ASAD KARIM

    Posted June 7, 2012 at 4:54 PM

    kHUBSOORET TAKHUEL UMDDA NAFEES.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:07 AM

      asad karim sb .bahut bht shukriya

50. Reply

    HAIDERMUMTAZSYED

    Posted June 7, 2012 at 5:19 PM

    AAJ TAK JITNA KALAM READ KIA HAI NEHAYAT UMMDA O AALLA LAGA DILL KO DUAA HAI ISE TERHAN AAP KI POETRY FACE BOOK PER JARI O SARI RAHE THNX ALEENA ITRAT RIZVI JI

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:06 AM

      janab haider mumtaz syed ji bahot shukriya aapka

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    Dr. Syed Basharat.

    Posted June 8, 2012 at 1:52 AM

    slaaaam …. how are you my dear and sweet friend ALEENA ji ,,,, yeh kalaaam bohat hi umda hai ,,, kasam se dil ko chu gaya hai,,, allah aap ko hamsha slamat rakhe…. ameen sum ameeen…

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:05 AM

      dr.syed basharat ji ..walekumsalam …shukriya aapka bht bht

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    piyush trivedi

    Posted June 16, 2012 at 2:46 AM

    Aleena ji apka koi jawab nahi…….
    Sirf ek lafj lajawab……
    Behad umda….
    Alfaj kam hai tarif karne ke liya

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:04 AM

      piyush trivedi ji nawazishat ka shukriya janab

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    Dr Irshad Ali

    Posted June 19, 2012 at 3:56 AM

    Khush they ham tere tasawwur Teri tasweer ke saath,aaj kyun jaan ye jaati hai yunhi shaam dhaley” waah ! Bahut khoob !! Aapke is sher ne Nasir Kazmi ke us sher ki yaad dila di ” Zindagi us ke tasawwur mein kati, door rah kar bhi wahi kaam aaya”

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:03 AM

      dr.irshad ali sb. baht shukriya aapka

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    Mohammad Rfe

    Posted June 19, 2012 at 4:38 PM

    udas dii kabhi hota hai jo tanhai main
    Aapki Ghazal yaad aati hain yon hi shaam dhale

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 21, 2012 at 6:03 AM

      mohammad rfe ji shukriya janab

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      irfan.cheef

      Posted July 27, 2012 at 3:07 AM

      irfan ahmed irfan

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    aaqib

    Posted June 28, 2012 at 8:18 AM

    masha allah apka har kalam qabile tarif hai
    agar aap k paas ghrelu mamlat pr koi ghazl ho to p.l.s
    jari karen

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted July 18, 2012 at 2:07 AM

      janab aqib sb. bht bht shukriya

56. Reply

    NASIR RASHDI

    Posted July 4, 2012 at 1:32 PM

    BUHAT KHOOB

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    inamdar shakil

    Posted July 6, 2012 at 6:55 PM

    bahut hi khoob likha hain.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted July 18, 2012 at 2:08 AM

      janab inamdar shakil sb. bht bht shukriya

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    NASIR RASHDI

    Posted July 7, 2012 at 1:31 PM

    BUHAT KHOOB RIZVI SAHIBA.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted July 18, 2012 at 2:09 AM

      janab nasir rashdi .sb. bht bht shukriya

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    Zia khan

    Posted July 17, 2012 at 7:42 AM

    Alina ji very nice,alina ji plz

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted July 18, 2012 at 2:09 AM

      ziya khan ji thnx

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    A .A.ARFI

    Posted July 22, 2012 at 1:02 PM

    very nice creative n original poetry

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted August 2, 2012 at 3:47 AM

      A.A.ARFI ji ,bht bht shukriya,nawazish

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    M.K. Mohiuddin

    Posted July 23, 2012 at 7:43 PM

    Alina Sahiba,
    Very nice and beautiful poetry. Dil Ko cho jati hai. Khabil Mubarak.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted August 2, 2012 at 3:48 AM

      janab M.K.MOHIUDDIN SB. shukriya

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    raheeb jaffri

    Posted July 26, 2012 at 11:05 PM

    chand kay aks se jal jaye ga shab ka daman……MASHA’ALLAH bohat khub kawishen tehrir hoi hain ap kay dast se………

    SAFAR KI SHAM SITARON SE PUCH KAR CHALNA”RAHEEB”

    ANDHERE RAST’E GAWAHI NAHI DIA KAR’E

    RAHEEB JAFFRI…………NA TAMAM

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    arshad

    Posted July 27, 2012 at 5:27 AM

    very nice by a good created mind
    MASHAALLAH

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted August 2, 2012 at 3:50 AM

      janab arshad sb. bht shukriya

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    Wajeeh Ahmed Tasawwur

    Posted July 27, 2012 at 5:56 AM

    …..” UNKI FURQUAT ME TO MUMKIN HE KI HO JAYE GHAZAL….
    SAMNE WO HO TO KAISE KOYI KAH PAYE GHAZAL……”
    ALEENA JI …. ghazal apne mahboob se bat karne ko kha gya he aor log isme aourat ki shabih dhundhte hen Lekin waqt ke sath mijaz badla aor ab khawateen khud is maidan me apni taba aazmayi kar rhi hen aor khub dad o tahseen wasul rhi hen aor us saf me ek nam apka vi he … umda ashaar, khubsurat kalam,Lajawab alfaz ka intekhab ….. mobarakbad

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted August 2, 2012 at 3:51 AM

      janab wajeeh ahmad tasawwur sb. bht bht shukriya

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    mobin sayed

    Posted July 28, 2012 at 10:32 AM

    beautiful ghazal

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted August 2, 2012 at 3:52 AM

      janab mobin syed ji shukriya

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    aleena itrat rizvi

    Posted August 2, 2012 at 3:49 AM

    janab raheeb jaffri ji ..bht bht shukriya

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    Muhammad yousuf siddiqi

    Posted August 4, 2012 at 8:16 AM

    Salam aleena, me ne aj first time is site ko visit kia he, ap ke ghazal prh k bhot bhot hoe, or india to ur poetry k shehanshahoo, meer or ghalib ke sir zamen he. Apko apke kawish py bhot bhot mubarak bad, Allah kry jidat e krdar ziada

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted August 21, 2012 at 1:45 PM

      muhammad yusuf siddiqui sb. tahedil se shukriya

68. Reply

    Dr. Syed Basharat.

    Posted August 20, 2012 at 4:36 PM

    Ek udasi chali aati hai yoon hi sham dhale…… wah aleeena ji wah …. bohat hi umda kalaam hai…. bas dil se dua hai ke allah aap ko slamat rakhe….

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted August 21, 2012 at 1:47 PM

      dr.syed basharat sb…bht bht shukriya,nawazish

69. Reply

    m kamran

    Posted August 22, 2012 at 4:47 PM

    dear madam aleena g!!\
    AOA! i hope u r fine now , i want to talk u at just some metters abot poetry !! i will waiting ur soonest reply ilike ur poetry !!! my cell num is 03456821827

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted August 30, 2012 at 3:53 PM

      janab M.KAMRAN sb. aapko jo bhi poetry ke mutalliq arz karna ho to aap hamen email kar sakte hain…..shukriya

70. Reply

    Syed Zubbar Hussain

    Posted August 28, 2012 at 4:25 PM

    Aslam o Alekum

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted August 30, 2012 at 3:54 PM

      walekumsalam

71. Reply

    Rozina sarfaraz

    Posted August 30, 2012 at 3:51 PM

    Bht bht umda

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted August 30, 2012 at 3:55 PM

      rozina sarfaraz ji bht shukriya

72. Reply

    Aleena itrat Rizvi Sahiba

    Posted September 17, 2012 at 6:42 AM

    Aleena very intresting heart touching ghazal.Aleena you shows anthoisism in your ever ghazls and sher.
    ALLAH RABUL aLLAMIN gives moreumer i khizer to you and your family members .Ameen.

73. Reply

    Aleena itrat Rizvi Sahiba

    Posted September 25, 2012 at 10:45 AM

    Aleena Itrat Sahiba Assalam-o-Allaikum
    BOHT KAMAL KI GHAZAL KAHI AAP NE DHEROON MUBARAK BAD

74. Reply

    Aleena itrat Rizvi Sahiba

    Posted September 25, 2012 at 10:47 AM

    MADAM ALEENA ASSALAM-O-ALLAIKUM
    BOHT KAMAL KI GHAZAL KAHI AAP NE BOHT BOHT MUBARAKBAD

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted November 24, 2012 at 11:53 AM

      aapka bht shukriya,nawazish

75. Reply

    shamshad

    Posted October 9, 2012 at 7:24 AM

    bahot hi umda hai mohtarma

    • Reply

      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted November 24, 2012 at 11:55 AM

      shamshad sb. bht shukriya

76. Reply

    syed Hasnain Ahad

    Posted October 9, 2012 at 11:25 AM

    BOHAT HI ALLA AOR ACHI SOCH HAI

    • Reply

      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted November 24, 2012 at 11:56 AM

      syed hasnain ahad sb. shukriya

77. Reply

    Kiran shah

    Posted October 22, 2012 at 11:38 AM

    masha allah bahot pyare khayal hain aap ka mai dil se dua karti hun ki aap ko bahot urooj milay aur urdu adab m aap ka bi aik alla muqaam ho Ameen

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted November 24, 2012 at 11:57 AM

      kiran shah ji shukriya

78. Reply

    dr iftiqar shakeel

    Posted December 7, 2012 at 1:50 PM

    aleena sahiba…..salam u adab….ap kee sheree salahiyaten tamam kee tamam is ek ghazal say hee zahir hotee hain,,,,,,fikar may gehrayee bhee hai aur geerayi bhee.sad mubarak.sr.shakeel

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted February 2, 2013 at 10:37 AM

      janab dr.iftiqar shakeel sb . bht bht shukriya

79. Reply

    Shaukat Qamar

    Posted January 30, 2013 at 7:11 PM

    ap kay alfaz bahoot khubsoorat hain.

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      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted March 3, 2013 at 5:42 AM

      janab shaukat qamar sb. shukriya

80. Reply

    ibrahim abidi

    Posted April 14, 2013 at 8:23 PM

    kya baat hai ap k kalam ki.wah maza aa gaya.

    • Reply

      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted April 16, 2013 at 11:05 AM

      janab ibrahim abidi ji shukriya

81. Reply

    Jawed Iqbal

    Posted May 14, 2013 at 6:33 AM

    Bahut Khoob kya kahne

    • Reply

      aleena itrat rizvi

      Posted June 13, 2013 at 2:07 PM

      bht shukriya jawed iqbal ji

82. Reply

    Azeezur Rehman Azeez

    Posted July 14, 2013 at 6:02 AM

    Its a wonderful site to promote the Urdu Literature

    • Reply

      aleena itrat

      Posted December 21, 2013 at 9:49 AM

      janab azeezur rehman sb. sahi farmaya aap ne

83. Reply

    M.Ishaq Athar

    Posted September 10, 2013 at 11:43 AM

    محترمه عللینا جی ، آداب اک اداسی چلی آتی هے یوں هی شام ڈهلے۰ واه اک منفرد خوبصورت لمبی ردیف کیساتهه بهت اعلی رواں غزل۰بهت خوب ہر شعر بیمثال۰داد حاضرهے۰
    والسلام
    خاکسار۰۰۰ محمد اسحاق اطہر

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      aleena itrat

      Posted December 21, 2013 at 9:48 AM

      bahot shukriya M.ISHAQ ATHAR SB.

84. Reply

    ARMAAN

    Posted May 3, 2014 at 5:18 PM

    bahot he nice aleena g

    • Reply

      aleena itrat

      Posted May 13, 2014 at 4:58 AM

      shukriya armaan sb.

85. Reply

    mohammed Abdulkareem Shah

    Posted May 27, 2014 at 10:29 AM

    محترمہ علینا صاحبہ
    آداب خلوص-میرا تعلق حیدر آباد دکن سے ہے.عرصہ دراز سے کویت میں مقیم ہوں. حلانکہ میں کوی شاعر نہیں ہوںالبتہ ادب سے بهت لگاؤ ہے.
    اردو چونکہ زبان مادر ہونے کے باعث نظم و نثر سے بھی زیادہ لگاؤ ہے.عمده کلامکو پڑهکر داد و تحسین دینا اپنا حق سمجھتا ہوں اسلئے بہتر سے بہترین کی جستجو رہتی ہے. اتفاقاً آپکا کلام پڑھا دل محظوظ ہوا. روح کی گہرائیوں میں اتر گیا.مبارکباد پیش ہے. جزاك الله خيراً.

    محمد عبد الکریم شاه

    • Reply

      aleena itrat

      Posted January 17, 2015 at 3:49 AM

      mohammed abdul kareem shah sb …bht bht shukriya

86. Reply

    maksood ali

    Posted June 26, 2014 at 7:39 AM

    وه عادت هے تو عادت سے کناره هو بھی سکتا هے
    مگر اس ساری کوشش میں ، خساره هو بھی سکتا هے
    رهیں گے ساتھ پھر بھی هم ، محبت مر گئی کیا غم
    کہ مصنوعی تنفس پر گزارا هو بھی سکتا هے
    اگر آنکھیں نہ بھر آئیں ، تو دل مٹھی میں آۓ گا
    هوا هے حال جو میرا ، تمھارا هو بھی سکتا هے
    کھلی آنکھوں میں ٹھہرا خواب ، کیسے ٹوٹ سکتا هے
    گماں یہ ، زندگی بھر کا سہارا هو بھی سکتا هے
    جو اتنی جگمگاہٹ دیکھتے هو آس پاس اپنے
    یہ میری آنکھ سے ٹوٹا ستاره هو بھی سکتا هے
    همیں حیرت سے مت دیکھو ، اب ایسا کیا ،کیا هم نے؟
    زمینی عشق هے صاحب ! دوباره هو بھی سکتا هے !

    مقصود علی عالم

    • Reply

      aleena itrat

      Posted January 17, 2015 at 3:50 AM

      maksood ali sb ,bht bht shukriya janab

87. Reply

    Moawaz Wyne

    Posted May 12, 2015 at 4:52 PM

    Bohat khoob
    bohat aala

    Malik e kainaat ap k zehan ko or wussat ata karay,,
    Ameen,

    • Reply

      aleena itrat

      Posted June 2, 2015 at 7:27 AM

      bahot bahot shukriya janab moawaz wyne sb

88. Reply

    ramandip singh sandhu

    Posted June 13, 2015 at 6:06 AM

    Yoon hi shaam dhale ….khob

    • Reply

      aleena itrat

      Posted February 1, 2016 at 9:51 AM

      shukriya

89. Reply

    SYED MOHD Ghazi Abbas Rizvi

    Posted February 1, 2016 at 10:33 AM

    Salamalekum
    Achha lagta hai aap ka kalam zindabad

    • Reply

      aleena itrat

      Posted July 2, 2016 at 8:56 AM

      bahot bahot shukriya ghazi abbas rizvi sb

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